Nurseoj
4 years ago
0.5
some people said that the costs of olympic game are much higher than its benefits. What do you think? please read the material and write a 1500 words essay (need in text reference/Similarity lower than 15%)
Content – 5 marks:
· Two sides discussed
· A balanced discussion
· Use of the students’ own ideas plus evidence from research
· Cohesion between ideas
· Answers the question
Structure – 5 marks:
· A clear introduction, giving general statements, an indication that this is a discussion essay and an outline of the main points to be mentioned in the text.
· Clear paragraph structure, topic sentences, supporting sentences, ONE idea, ONE paragraph,
· Conclusion, summarising main points, no new information, a decision about which side of the discussion is strongest, possible recommendations based on the evidence.
Grammar – 5 marks:
· Grammatical range and accuracy
· Appropriate tense used
· Connectives between ideas, paragraphs, eg, adding, contrasting, showing consequence
· Use of modality
· Spelling and punctuation
· Meaning is clear
Academic Style and language – 5 marks:
· Accurate referencing; use of in text references, reference list, correct formatting of both and matching references in reference list
· Minimum of 5 sources
· Effective paraphrasing, no plagiarism
· Use of academic language, no contractions or colloquial language
· No first or second person pronouns
